Saturday, March 14, 2015

The I's don't have it!

"All in favor say, I,


That statement comes from an agreement place,

But, I's do not always have it.

I didn't realize that I was addressing the world egotistically,

Until my brother made a suggestion to try to limit my I's in my recent post called, "The Edge."

When Rereading my entry without the I's, Tears almost formed.

Now, having to apologize because it isn't all about me, and my stories aren't mine alone:

The realization has come to me to reexamine how my approach may come off to others but more importantly the lasting words that are left from my writings.

It will take time to remove the I's,

But what can be said is, I's don't have it,

Nope, not this time.

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